Saturday, December 9, 2017

i understand the luddites

Preparing to do my daily writing on a computer that took a while to update ... *insert writerly grumbling*

Deep breaths. Patience is a virtue. And now, for a little writing warmup --a villanelle.



i understand the luddites: a villanelle

we throw our phones against the wall --
efficiency's a poor excuse.
technology must surely fall!

you make us feel weak & small,
& we recoil from the abuse --
we throw our phones against the wall.

so we begin our vicious brawl.
it tried but failed to seduce --
technology will surely fall!

...

we lack sufficient wherewithal --
destruction now seems half-obtuse.
we threw the phone against the wall.

we can't return the agent's call,
& violence constitutes misuse --
our anger came before the fall.

we'll bathe our wounds in alcohol.
we're slow but eager to produce?
we threw our phones against the wall,
& so, we brought about our fall.




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